Monday 26 October 2009

Used Photos





















I took this picture for the quote boxes on the second page of my main story. This was a idea I took from my research and I think it is a good way to present it because it highlights the opinions that the readers will care about. This model is posing as the Bristol City captain as is taken in the same place as the real portrait pictures of the squad for authenticity.


As you can see there are two versions of this photo. The top picture is the original and the the bottom one is the adapted version. I cropped the original to cut down on the unnecessary amount of background and to centre the subject more in the picture. It also turns the shot into more of a close up instead of a more medium shot. This also helped it fit into the "vox pop" format. I tried not to use to much photo editing software such as Adobe Photoshop in my pictures because it is unrealistic to see this in a local newspaper. However, i edited the brightness and contrast of the photo to make it look more crisp and professional.















This is a picture of the actual area where the new Bristol City stadium is being built. I took this picture from a number of different locations and this is the one that turned out best. A high level of zoom was required in the taking of this shot as the public cannot get any closer than where I was stood at this moment in time. This picture has good lighting and is a good example of a extreme long shot and use of a zoom shot. It serves its purpose, giving the reader a idea of where the new stadium is and what stage of development it is at.















This picture was used as the main picture on my second page. It shows the Bristol City captain standing outside of the old stadium. I used a low angle on this shot to make him look bigger and more dominant showing his power as captain of the team. The picture was taken just outside of the entry gates to the Bristol City Stadium showing that its time is coming to an end. I also used a world cup football in the captains hands to connect it to the story and Bristol City’s future.















The picture above is another extreme longshot and was used for the main picture on my front page and my main story. I decided to use a picture like this because it links to the story really well. It shows the dolman stand at the current Bristol City stadium and also shows in the writing on the stand “Bristol City”. I thought this was good because it is a familiar site to the fans and immediately shows the reader what the story will be about.
I went along at about 17:00 in the day so that the shadow would be covering the pitch and the sun would be shinning on the stand, highlighting “Bristol City” on the stand. This also helps catch the reader’s eye and any passersby to the newspaper stand will hopefully want to pick the paper up.














I think this is my most interesting photo out of all that I have taken for this project. It is an action shot at medium range taken of my local photo team in the league cup. It was a great shot to use for my supplement advertisement because it shows the hustle and passion of local league football.










This photo was used for the sub story on my second page. It is a medium shot but was taken on a camera phone so the quality has been affected. Again I changed the brightness and contrast of the photo to attempt to make it look sharper. I took this during the later stages of the Bristol Half Marathon as the runner was more likely to be look like he had been working hard but still have a determined expression on his face. This was important because in my article he is the winner of the race so it is important to catch him at the right point and make sure the model looked athletic and fit.












I used this picture for my advertisement on my newspaper second page. The advert is advertising accommodation so it was important to make the place look as desirable as possible. I took the photo at about 11:00 in the morning when the skies were clear and it was sunny to make the harbour look more attractive. I used a extreme longshot which allowed me show a good overview of the area.

Wednesday 21 October 2009

Unused Photos














This photo was for one of my sub-stories “Running for a record”. I took this at a different race and as my story is for the half marathon I decided to have this as a back up just in case my pictures from the marathon weren’t good enough















This picture was not used simply because I had the time to take multiple shots so I chose the best one out of the lot. The other photo is not so grainy and is farming a better area.















This is a photo of the Williams stand. This idea behind this photo was to take a picture of where all the directors sit as they are the main players in the decisions made for the new stadium. However, as I couldn’t get any suitable models to act as the chairman of the football club and the council I decided not to use the photo at all.















This picture is of the far corner of Ashton Gate. I thought about using this for a second page picture as it shows the pitch cordoned off which relates to the closure of the stadium to be replaced by a new one. However, I decided not to because it was to late in the day and the shadow had dropped on the pitch in an undesired way. Also the stadium is not framed very well in the picture, there is to much sky and not enough of the ground itself.














The picture above shows a backdrop of the Dolman stand at Ashton Gate, Bristol City’s home stadium. This is a good backdrop but the lighting is a bit to dark and the “Bristol City” written on the stand in the background is not fully shown.



















The photo above was a good idea of a photo and was executed well, the light was good and the background suits the purpose as well. The only problem with it is that the models eyes are closed which ruins the entire shot. It was unfortunate that my time was restricted inside the stadium which didn’t allow time for multiple shots. If I could do this again I would plan my photos in more detail so I knew the exact few shots I wanted.















This photo was unsuitable for use because of the dark lighting which makes the picture look unprofessional and gloomy. The weather is also unsuitable because it makes the picture look dull and changes the viewer’s perception. If it is sunny the viewer has a positive outlook on the picture but as it is not the reader will have a more negative outlook on the picture and see it in a totally different way.














This photo is similar to the picture I used for my main story on my second page. I decided not to use it because it is not framed as well as the other and has part of a car showing in the corner. Also the pose of the model used was not was I was looking for and his expression is not portraying the happy emotion I was looking for.

Monday 5 October 2009

Writing and Design

I have now started the production of my newspaper. There have been some changes to my initial plan and ideas. I have changed some of the stories i first planned to do; I still have my main story of "Bristol’s world cup bid advance" but have changed the title to "Bristol's World Cup Bid Kicks Off". I did this to make the story sound more interesting and added a pun as from my research I found pun's is popular in local newspapers. However, i have eliminated the timeline idea for this story due to lack of space on the page.

I have got rid of the stories "Performance at Pier opening" and "Party at pool to celebrate season" because of the lack of pictures available to get but have changed them into other real life events, "Bank holiday hold up due to suicide jump" and "Marathon winner backs Olympic bid" - which is my only fictional story.

I have also designed and made my adverts and two supplement "splashes" to correspond to the adverts i have seen in my local paper research.

Peer Assessment

At this stage I have just completed the "rough cut" version of my local newspaper. We looked at each others work as a group and evaluated it. We talked through each person’s piece and told them what was good and what they could possibly change.

In my peer assessment i was told to compact my title, by getting rid of the big areas of white page to make it look better. I also changed one of my adverts to make it look more professional. On my second page I was told to improve my layout and try and fit in another story. To do this I made my main article slightly smaller and added another article below. I still managed to keep all the same features as before but compact everything and get more in to the same space.

Saturday 3 October 2009

Rough Cut

At this stage I have just completed the "rough cut" version of my local newspaper. We looked at each others work as a group and evaluated it. We talked through each person’s piece and told them what was good and what they could possibly change.
















































This is the first production of my front page but with make shift photos to give an idea of what it would look like. This was peer accessed and shown to members of my target audience to get there opinions on what they like and what they didn't.

In my peer assessment i was told to compact my title, by getting rid of the big areas of white page to make it look better. I also changed one of my adverts to make it look more professional. On my second page I was told to improve my layout and try and fit in another story. To do this I made my main article slightly smaller and added another article below. I still managed to keep all the same features as before but compact everything and get more in to the same space.

Thursday 1 October 2009

Research and Planning

Today we had to hand in all of our planning and research notes.
This included our proposal, plan, layout and research into front covers,adverts, layouts of front covers and possible second pages.
we analysed adverts and conventions. Also we analysed articles and adapted are writting style to match the style of a local newspaper.